Electrobel

it starts off really good, but i was expecting some kind of beat or vocal to advance the song, now it feels like we never got past the intro. also, the energy vocal needs more work, it's always the same. but a promising start, good melodies.

mm I had the same thing, after a while you wonder where the ryhtms are....

I have added a new version. Comments above are for the old version.

Suggestion, lose the bleeps after the first minute and add a break of some kind, with another instrument, sound-fx, even another melody would sound refreshing. You could pickup the first line again and work yourself to a climax. The chords sound great, but same as with the bleeps, don't hang on to them too long. ;-) Otherwise, very promising!

eatme, my remake of this track is online. go check it out: http://www.electrobel.be/muzik/22556/energy__mutation_by_rool_